Scribe ~ October 28

(I'm not really scribe today but Kendall asked me to post something so here I am. - Zach C)

SCRIBE ~ OCTOBER 28

Discussed thesis statements and how to improve. Our thesis statements: (Block 3) (Block 5)

THESIS TIPS

• Keep it from being too wordy, simple to read, not confusing.
• Phrase simply
• Keep it from being ambiguous
• Be concise.
• Feel free with topics.
• Easily defined topic + subtopics.
• Eliminate passive words.

Homework: SAT Vocab and Completion of 1st Body Paragraph (Tomorrow)

(1st body paragraph should have all three quotes)